Wow! Great diamante poem Kenan! I love your adjectives (describing words) in your poem as I can really picture how you were feeling. Remember to follow the format of the poem correctly by using your WALT to help you. Tick each line off when you have written it so you don't get muddled up where you are up to in your poem.
I am so proud of my poem and that Mrs Beach said it was really good. But I need to do more practising at home because I need to use more describing words in my writing to make it interesting.
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Wow! Great diamante poem Kenan! I love your adjectives (describing words) in your poem as I can really picture how you were feeling. Remember to follow the format of the poem correctly by using your WALT to help you. Tick each line off when you have written it so you don't get muddled up where you are up to in your poem.
I am so proud of my poem and that Mrs Beach said it was really good. But I need to do more practising at home because I need to use more describing words in my writing to make it interesting.
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